V?? l???i Nguy???n Quang Thi???u

Thứ sáu - 28/06/2019 07:44

V?? l???i l?? m???t lo???i vi???t c?? t??? th???p k??? 60 th??? k??? tr?????c v?? b??ng ph??t nhi???u nh???t t??? th???p k??? 90 th??? k??? tr?????c ?????n h??m nay. N?? c??ng b??ng ph??t h??n n???a khi H???i Nh?? v??n Vi???t Nam n??m 1993 tr??o gi???i cho t???p ???S??? m???t ng??? c???a l???a??? c???a Nguy???n Quang Thi???u v?? v???a r???i (n??m 2011 - 2012), H???i Nh?? v??n Vi???t Nam l???i ti???p t???c trao gi???i cho c??? 4 t???p c???a c??c t??c gi??? Mai V??n Ph???n, T??? Qu???c Ho??i, ????? Do??n Ph????ng, ?????nh Th??? Nh?? Th??y, ki???u vi???t nh?? Nguy???n Quang Thi???u n???i d??i.

V?? L???I NGUY???N QUANG THI???U
(B??i do t??c gi??? g???i CBTT)
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V?? l???i l?? m???t lo???i vi???t c?? t??? th???p k??? 60 th??? k??? tr?????c v?? b??ng ph??t nhi???u nh???t t??? th???p k??? 90 th??? k??? tr?????c ?????n h??m nay. N?? c??ng b??ng ph??t h??n n???a khi H???i Nh?? v??n Vi???t Nam n??m 1993 tr??o gi???i cho t???p ???S??? m???t ng??? c???a l???a??? c???a Nguy???n Quang Thi???u v?? v???a r???i (n??m 2011 - 2012), H???i Nh?? v??n Vi???t Nam l???i ti???p t???c trao gi???i cho c??? 4 t???p c???a c??c t??c gi??? Mai V??n Ph???n, T??? Qu???c Ho??i, ????? Do??n Ph????ng, ?????nh Th??? Nh?? Th??y, ki???u vi???t nh?? Nguy???n Quang Thi???u n???i d??i.
??i???n h??nh c???a V?? l???i l?? tri???t ti??u m???t tr??m ph???n v???n ??i???u, x??a b??? c??ch ngh??, c??ch c???m c???a ??ng cha v?? th?? ca truy???n th???ng d??n t???c v?? th??? gi???i, t???c t???, r???c r???i, t?? m??, d??i d??ng v??n t???, d??y c?? ra d??y mu???ng, nh???t nh???o, ????nh ????? m??nh, ????nh ????? ng?????i ?????c, dung t???c, t??nh d???c b???nh ho???n, s??nh d??ng ch??? n?????c ngo??i m???t c??ch t??y ti???n, tu??? h???ng???
V?? l???i c?? m???t ?????c ??i???m n???a l?? kh??ng th??? ?????c n???i v??i ba d??ng.
Nguy???n Quang Thi???u c??ng l?? m???t trong nh???ng ?????i bi???u c???a V?? l???i ???y v???a ???????c c??c b??o ch?? ch??nh th???ng, c??c v??? vi???n ch??nh th???ng, c??c h???c gi???, nh?? ph?? b??nh, gi??o s?? ?????i h???c, c??nh h???u vi???t b??i l???ng x??, ca ng???i h???t l???i. H??? coi ???? l?? s??? l?? ???Hi???n t?????ng th?? Nguy???n Quang Thi???u v?? l??? tr??nh c??ch t??n???, Th?? Nguy???n Quang Thi???u nh??n t??? m???u g???c??? (T???p ch?? Nh?? v??n s??? 6 - 2012); ???H???p ??en??? Nguy???n Quang Thi???u ??? B??o V??n ngh??? s??? 17 + 18 th??ng 4 ??? 2012...
C??ch t??n t???c l?? l??m m???i kh??ng ch??? ??? th?? ca m?? trong cu???c s???ng mu??n lo??i c??ng ph???i lu??n lu??n ?????i m???i ????? ph??t tri???n t???n t???i. Th??? h??? sau ti???n b??? h??n th??? h??? tr?????c th?? mu??n lo??i, mu??n v???t, x?? h???i m???i ph??t tri???n, kh??ng th?? ch??? d???ng l???i v?? ??i ?????n tri???t ti??u!
Nh??ng l??m m???i nh?? th??? n??o? T??i ???? nhi???u l???n n??i v??? vi???c l??m m???i. L??m m???i ??? c??ch t??n ch??? kh??ng ph???i c??ch m???ng. ?????n nh?? c??ch m???ng l???t ????? ho??n to??n qu?? kh??? m?? ng?????i v???n c??n gi??? g??n v?? ti???p thu nh???ng ??u t?? c???a ?????i tr?????c ????? l???i, hu???ng h??? c??ch t??n - l??m m???i, ph???i c?? k??? th???a v?? ph??t huy c??i hay, c??i ?????p c???a d??n t???c, c???a nh??n lo???i. Nh?? b??c h???c L?? Qu?? ????n n??i: ???Ng?????i t??i gi???i h??n h???t m???t th???i, c??ng kh??ng ???????c ph?? b??? ?????i tr?????c???
Nh???ng ng?????i t??m t??i ?????i m???i th?? ca l?? ????ng tr??n tr???ng. Nh??ng l???y c??? t??m t??i ?????i m???i ????? ph?? b???, ?????p ????? nh???ng chu???n m???c, nh???ng tinh hoa c???a cha ??ng t??? mu??n ?????i ????? l???i l?? m???t ?? ngh??, h??nh ?????ng ??i??n r???.
H??n M???c T??? c?? n??i: ???V???n bi???t th?? ca ph???i t??n k??? (m???i v?? l???), song th?? ta l?? th?? qu???c ??m, ng?????i ph????ng ????ng chu???ng n???i ??au th??m tr???m, n???i bu???n k??n ????o. Ta ph???i th??? hi???n c??i tinh th???n ph????ng ????ng ???y.???
Nh??ng nh???ng ng?????i vi???t h??m nay v?? nh???t Nguy???n Quang Thi???u kh??ng theo ti??u ch?? ???y m?? ??i t??m m???t c??ch vi???t r???t chi l?? V?? l???i.
Nguy???n Quang Thi???u c??? t??m m???t c??ch n??i, c??ch l???p ng??n nh?? vi???c ?????t t??n t???p th?? ???S??? m???t ng??? c???a l???a??? ??? (H???a ????ch b???t th???y s???), ???? th??? hi???n c??ch ???y. ?????c th???y l??? tai, kh??ng theo c??ch n??i c??ch vi???t thu???n Vi???t, n?? nh?? l?? c??ch vi???t c???a T??y, nh??ng T??y ng?????i ta kh??ng vi???t th???. C??u th??, c??u v??n c???a T??y d??i nh??ng ph???i ch??nh x??c, kh??ng th???a ch???, kh??ng th???a ?? v?? ph???i thu???n ch???ng ng??n ng???. ?????ng n??y Nguy???n Quang Thi???u c??? t???o ra c??ch vi???t l??? nh??ng l???i v???a d??ng ch??? n?????c ngo??i, v???a kh??ng theo c??ch c???m c??ch ngh?? c???a d??n t???c. C??ch n??y c??ng ???? c?? ng?????i tr?????c Nguy???n Quang Thi???u vi???t nh?? ???S??? em c?? m???t c???n thi???t nh?? nh???ng s???m mai??? (Li??n kh??c nh???ng b??i th?? t??nh th???i c??ch xa ??? Thanh T??m Tuy???n)
Ch??? s??? nguy??n l?? ch??? H??n ???? t????ng ?????i Vi???t h??a. N?? c?? ba ngh??a : 1- vi???c, 2 - l??m vi???c, 3 - th???. Kh??ng hi???u s??? m???t ng??? c???a l???a ??? ????y l?? vi???c, l??m vi???c hay l?? th???? Suy ??o??n trong b??i hi???u theo ngh??a H??n ???H???a ????ch b???t th???y s?????? th?? c?? th??? l?? vi???c. D???ch ra l?? ???Vi???c m???t ng??? c???a l???a??? ch???c l?? ????ng ?? t??c gi???!
Y??n ba th??m x??? ????m qu??n s???
D??? b??n quy lai nguy???t m??n thuy???n
(H??? Ch?? Minh)
Gi???a d??ng b??n b???c vi???c qu??n
Khuya v??? b??t ng??t tr??ng ng??n ?????y thuy???n
(Xu??n Th???y d???ch)
Th???i Nguy???n ????nh Chi???u, c??ng l?? th???i H??n h???c ??ang th???nh h??nh, c??? ????? Chi???u c??n ??i thi t?? t??i H??n h???c, th??? nh??ng th?? C???, v??n t???, ph?? c???a C??? th?? r???t Vi???t h??a.
Vi???c c???y, vi???c c??y vi???c b???a tay v???n l??m quen
T???p khi??n, t???p s??ng, t???p c??? m???t ch??a t???ng ng??
(V??n t??? ngh??a s??? C???n Giu???c )
N???u vi???t nh?? Nguy???n Quang Thi???u v?? Thanh T??m Tuy???n l?? ph???i:
S??? c???y, s??? c??y, s??? b???a tay v???n l??m quen
T???p khi??n, t???p s??ng, t???p c??? m???t ch??a t???ng ng??
L???i b??n v??? m???t ng???. M???t ng??? ch??? m???t tr???ng th??i t??m l?? c???a con ng?????i do lao l???c, do ngh?? ng???i ??au kh??? nhi???u, th???n kinh y???u, do ch???n ?????ng th??n kinh, do ch???n th????ng s??? n??o ???n??n d???n ?????n m???t ng???. N??i chung n?? l?? m???t tr???ng th??i b???nh l?? nhi???u h??n. C??n ng?????i kh???e m???nh, th???n kinh v???ng v??ng th?? kh?? c?? th??? m???t ng???.
C???nh khuya nh?? v??? ng?????i ch??a ng???,
Ch??a ng??? v?? lo n???i n?????c nh??
(H??? Ch?? Minh)
Ng?????i kh???e m???nh, c???ng r???n, ng?????i ta ch??a ng??? ho???c ng?????i ta kh??ng ng??? ????? lo qu???c gia ?????i s???, ch??? h??? kh??ng b??? ch???ng b???nh m???t ng???!
V?? v???y vi???c ?????t t??n t???p th?? ???S??? m???t ng??? c???a l???a??? v???a kh??ng Vi???t h??a, v???a th???a ch???, th???a l???i, v???a kh??ng ???n trong nh???n th???c. C?? th??? ?????t theo c??ch thu???n Vi???t ???L???a m???t ng?????? ho???c ???L???a th???c??????
C??ch ?????t t???a ?????, ?????t c??u n??y Nguy???n Quang Thi???u l???p ??i l???p l???i ??? nhi???u b??i kh??c nh??: ???S??? ???m ??p g???i ch??n ???? gi??? ch???t t??i??? (Ti???ng v???ng) ??? In trong s??ch gi??o khoa Ti???ng Vi???t l???p 5 t???p m???t, th??ng 1 n??m 2011.
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                  Nh?? th?? Nguy???n Quang Thi???u
C??ch vi???t c???a Nguy???n Quang Thi???u ??a ph???n d??i d??ng v??n t???. Vi???t ng???n vi???t d??i t??y theo c???m x??c, suy ngh??, t??y theo m???c ????? t??nh c???m c???a t??c gi???. C??i ????ng vi???t d??i th?? vi???t d??i, c??i ????ng vi???t ng???n th?? vi???t ng???n. C?? c??i kh??ng ????ng ba d??ng t??c gi??? l???i k??o ra tr??ng giang ?????i h???i
???Nh???ng ng??n ch??n x????ng x???u, m??ng d??i v?? ??en to??? ra nh?? m??ng ch??n g?? m??i.
???? n??m n??m, m?????i l??m n??m, ba m????i n??m v?? n???a ?????i t??i th???y
Nh???ng ng?????i ????n b?? xu???ng g??nh n?????c s??ng
Nh???ng b???i t??c v??? x???i x??? tr??n l??ng ??o m???m v?? ?????t
M???t b??n tay h??? b??m v??o ?????u tr??n g??nh b?? b???ng ch??i v??i???
(Nh???ng ng?????i ????n b?? g??nh n?????c s??ng)
Hay:
???Nh???ng chi???u xa qu?? t??i mong d??ng s??ng d??ng l??n ngang tr???i cho t??i ???????c nh??n th???y
Cho ????i m???t nh??? th????ng c???a t??i nh?? hai h???c ?????t ven b???, n??i nh???ng ch?? b???ng ?????n l??m t??? ???????c gi??n d???a n?????c m??a s??ng. ??? (S??ng ????y)
N??n nh??? r???ng ??? ??o???n thi t???i h???o ph????? (Th?? ng???n c?? s???c m???nh v?? bi??n). Ngay ph????ng T??y c??ng c?? n??i ph???i c?? n??c (vi???t ng???n).
B??c H??? c??ng ???? t???ng n??i: ???B??c ??t c?? thi gi??? xem v??n ngh???, nh??ng khi xem th?? th???y n?? d??i d??ng, d??y c?? ra d??y mu???ng, h??nh nh?? ng?????i vi???t c??? vi???t d??i ra ????? l???y nhu???n b??t. R???i l???i s??nh d??ng ch??? n?????c ngo??i. Ch??? ta c?? th?? n??n d??ng ch??? ta, ch??? ta kh??ng c?? m???i m?????n ch??? n?????c ngo??i ???   theo ???Gi??? g??n s??? trong s??ng ti???ng Vi???t ??? S???a ?????i l??? l???i l??m vi???c)
C?? nhi???u b??i vi???t v???a d??i, v???a l???p lu???n th???a th???i. ??i???n h??nh l?? b??i ???Nh???ng ng?????i ????n b?? g??nh n?????c s??ng??? (???? tr??ch d???n ??? tr??n). V?? d??? c??u:
"???? n??m n??m, m?????i l??m n??m, ba m????i n??m v?? n???a ?????i t??i th???y???. ???? n??m n??m, m?????i l??m n??m, ba m????i n??m v?? n???a ?????i t??i th???y, th?? c???n g?? ph???i k??? ?????n t???ng ch???ng m???t th???i gian nh?? v???y. K??? th??? sao cho h???t. N???u k??? th??? th?? ph???i vi???t cho ?????: ???? m???t n??m, ???? hai n??m, ???? ba n??m??? ???? v?? ????, th?? ?????n bao gi??? m???i k??? xong. Vi???t ch??? ng???n g???n l?? ???n???a ?????i t??i th???y??? th?? v???a ?????y ?????, v???a ch??nh x??c. C??n c?? nh???ng ng?????i, h??? ch??? s???ng 50 tu???i , 40 tu???i, 30 tu???i th?? sao?
M???a mai thay b??i n??y ???? ???????c ch???n in trong 100 b??i th?? hay nh???t th??? k??? XX(!)
C??ch ngh?? v?? c??ch vi???t kh??ng ch??nh x??c, vi???t l???y ???????c c???a Nguy???n Quang Thi???u c??n nhi???u nhi???u. Nh?? b??i ???Trong qu??n r?????u r???n???. Ng?????i ng???i trong qu??n r?????u r???n, ch???c l?? kh??ng u???ng r?????u n??n t???nh b??, nh?? u???ng n?????c chai lave ???????m v?? ?????i ch??n v??i trong qu??n nh???/ R???ng mang mang g???i t???ng kh??c thu v??ng???. Ng?????i ?????c t?????ng t??c gi??? ??ang ??i d???o r???ng thu b???ch d????ng ??? b??n Nga!
???Nh???ng con r???n b??? th???y t??ng trong r?????u". ???Th???y t??ng??? l?? ch??n n?????c. T??ng - nguy??n ch??? H??n l?? ch??n, v??i ???? t????ng ?????i Vi???t h??a. Khi ng?????i ch???t, nh???t l?? ng?????i th??n, ng?????i ta d??ng ch??? t??ng cho nh??? ??i, ????? ??au h??n n???u d??ng ch??? Vi???t l?? ch??n ho???c v??i. T??? c??? ?????n nay c?? nhi???u c??ch t??ng: th??? t??ng, h???a t??ng, th???y t??ng, m???c t??ng, ??i???u t??ng, th???ch t??ng, c???u t??ng, ??i???n t??ng??? ???Nh???ng con r???n b??? th???y t??ng trong r?????u??? ??? T???c l?? nh???ng con r???n ch??n n?????c trong r?????u. Th???t ra r?????u l?? n?????c c?? n???ng ????? men cao, c??ng nh?? n?????c bi???n c?? n???ng ????? mu???i cao m?? th???i. Nh???ng ng?????i ??i bi???n khi ch???t ???????c ??em b??? xu???ng bi???n v?? n??i nh?? c??ch n??i c???a Nguy???n Quang Thi???u: ???Nh???ng con ng?????i b??? th???y t??ng trong bi???n???. N?? v?? l?? v?? bu???n c?????i, ??au x??t bi???t bao cho c??ch l???p c??u, c??ch vi???t nh?? th??? n??y.
Cha ??ng ta ???? c?? c??ch n??i r???t hay khi ??em b??? th???o qu??? v?? ?????ng v???t qu?? l??m thu???c v??o r?????u v?? g???i l?? ???ng??m r?????u???: t??o ng??m r?????u, cam ng??m r?????u, l??, m???n ng??m r?????u, b??m b???p ng??m r?????u, r???n ?????c ng??m r?????u??? N???u n??i cho c?? h??nh ???nh m?????n ch??? H??n th?? c?? th??? n??i ???nh???ng con r???n b??? ??em t???u t??ng???!
C??ch vi???t c???a Nguy???n Quang Thi???u r???t k??m thi ph??p (ngh??? thu???t th??), l???m d???ng nhi???u ch??? nhi???u t??? nh?? : kh??c, v??? ?????i, l???m d???ng t??? H??n Vi???t ch??a ???????c Vi???t h??a???
Nh???ng con c?? thi??ng quay m???t kh??c
?????????
V?? c?? thi??ng l???i quay m???t kh??c
(Nh???ng ng?????i ????n b?? g??nh n?????c s??ng ??? ???? d???n).
??i m??i c??t kh??, m??i t??c m??? t??i
T??i qu?? xu???ng v???c c??t ???p v??o m???t
T??i kh??c.
(S??ng ????y)
Nh?? th?? Tr???n M???nh H???o g???i Nguy???n Quang Thi???u l?? ???nh?? kh??c h???c??? th???t kh??ng sai!
????m v?? ?????i ch??n v??i trong qu??n nh???
(Trong qu??n r?????u r???n)
Cha ??ng ta c?? nh???ng ph??p tu t??? r???t di???u ngh???, ng?????i ta kh??ng h??? n??i ?????n m???t ch??? kh??c m?? ?????i n??o nghe c??ng r??ng r??ng:
C??m ng?????i kh??? l???m m??? ??i!
Ch???ng nh?? c??m m??? v???a ng???i, v???a ??n
Hay:
Chi???u chi???u ra ?????ng ng?? chi???u
Nh??n l??n m??? m??? ch??n ch??u ru???t ??au!
(Ca dao)
B???n v??? ch???ng c?? chi ????a
C?? hai l???n n???p m?? ch??a l???t l??n!???
(Ca dao)
R???i m??a to??c r??? r??m kh??
B???n v??? qu?? b???n bi???t m?? m?? t??m
(Ca dao)
??? ????y Nguy???n Quang Thi???u v?? nhi???u ng?????i vi???t kh??c d??ng v?? thi??n l??ng ch??? ??? kh??c???, ng?????i ta g???i l?? c??c ???nh?? kh??c h???c??? m?? ch???ng l??m m???t ai m???i l??ng! Th???t l?? t???i h???i!
Nguy???n Quang Thi???u hay vi???t v??? qu?? h????ng m??nh, v??ng l??ng Ch??a, s??ng ????y l?? x??? ??o??i x??a nh??ng kh??ng h??? th???y b??ng d??ng ???X???a ??o??i m??y tr???ng??? ??? ????u, kh??ng th???y ??o l???a H?? ????ng ??? ????u, kh??ng th???y H?? T??y qu?? l???a ??? ????u? M???t mi???n c???i ngu???n d??n ca B???c B???, m???t mi???n h??t xoan, gh???obi???n m???t trong c??ch vi???t c???a Nguy???n Quang Thi???u!
M?? X??? ??o??i kh??ng ch??? ng?????i con c???a x??? s??? ???y m??u th???t m?? c??? d??n t???c, th???m ch?? c??? ch??u ??, ch??u ??u c??ng c?? trong h???n c???a h???.
Bao gi??? tr??? l???i ?????ng B????ng C???n
L??n n??i S??i S??n ng?? l??a v??ng
S??ng ????y ch???m ngu???n qua Ph??? Qu???c
S??o di???u khuy kho???t th???i ????m tr??ng
(Quang D??ng)
N???ng S??i G??n anh ??i m?? ch???t nh???
B???i v?? em m???c ??o l???a ????ng
( Nguy??n Sa)
B??ng chi???c thoi ????a, ??nh m???t long lanh, tr???i ?????t H?? T??y qu?? em d???t l???a
M??y tr???ng Ba V?????h???n th?? Nguy???n Tr??i
(H?? T??y qu?? l???a ??? Nh???t Lai)
M???t l???n tr?? chuy???n v???i nh?? v??n Trung Qu???c Tr???nh B?? N??ng nguy??n T???ng bi??n t???p b??o V??n Ngh??? Trung Qu???c t???i B???c Kinh, ??ng n??i: ?????? vi???t Nam t??i y??u th??ch nh???t l?? Ca dao v?? Quan h??? B???c Ninh???. Trong khi ???? c??c nh?? th??, nh???c s??? n?????c m??nh ??i t??m con c??o l??ng ??en (?? c???a Gam zatop) ??? ????u ????u.
Vi???t ng???n, vi???t gi???n d??? m???i kh??. ????ng T??y, kim c??? g?? cha ??ng c??ng ???? d???y
Rien n???est plus dificille que d???ecrire ficille - Kh??ng c?? g?? kh?? b???ng vi???t d??? hi???u ??? Ch??m ng??n Ph??p. "C??ng phu th??m x??? thi b??nh d???" - Th?? hay nh???t l?? th?? d??? hi???u ??? L???c D??? ?????i T???ng, Trung Qu???c.
??i???n h??nh cho s??? d??i d??ng v??n t???, t???c t??? l??? b???ch, qu??i d??? c???a Nguy???n Quang Thi???u l?? b??i ???L???ch s??? t???m th???m Th??? Nh?? K??????.
(Tr??ch)
"Ng?????i h?????ng d???n : ???????c d???t th??? c??ng b???i m???t ng?????i ????n b?? Th??? Nh?? K???
"Ng?????i mua : Mua l???i t??? m???t ??ng gi?? da ??en Cuba ??? Havana n??m 1986
"Ch??? nh??n : Q??a t???ng c???a con trai t??i. ???????c treo tr??n b???c t?????ng n??y 21 n??m
L??c g???n s??ng ti???ng nh???ng c??nh kh?? g??y
Nh???ng con nai c??i m??a ?????ng ?????c
Ch??? nh??n b???c th???m 87 tu???i t???nh gi???c u???ng tr?? ngu???i
Nh???ng con nai ?????c ng??n ng???t
Ng??i nh?? nh?? kh??ng bao gi??? m??? c???a
M???t b?? gi?? ??i ti???u l???n th??? 5 n??i : "M??? ??au l???m"???
K???ch kh??ng ra k???ch, ?????i tho???i kh??ng ra ?????i tho???i, t??? kh??ng ph???i t???, c??o kh??ng ph???i c??o, ??i???u v??n c??ng kh??ng ra ??i???u v??n, k??? chuy???n h???c sinh c??ng kh??ng ra k??? chuy???n h???c sinh, nh???t k?? c??ng kh??ng ph???i nh???t k??, h??t ru b??, h??t ru ??ng c??ng kh??ng ph???i??? N?? l?? m???t th??? ba ?????u s??u tay, qu??i thai v??n ch????ng. Th??? r???i n?? l???i c??n dung t???c: ???M???t b?? gi?? ??i ti???u 5 l???n n??i: ???M??? ??au l???m!???. Trong b???nh vi???n khoa d?????ng l??o, c??c b??c s??? ghi b???nh ??n c??n s???ch s??? h??n nhi???u c??i g???i l?? th?? n??y!
Th?? h???u hi???n ?????i c?? th??? l?????c b??? v???n ??i???u, coi nh??? v???n ??i???u nh??ng ?? t??? ph???i s??u s???c, h??nh ???nh ph???i m???i l???, ?????c ????o, t??nh c???m ph???i d???t d??o rung ?????ng ng?????i ?????c m???i ch???p nh???n:
Th???i gian ??i, xin h??y ?????ng tr??i n???a
???? l?? l???i kh???n c???u
C???a nh???ng k??? ??ang y??u
T???i sao c??c v??? l???i kh??ng kh???n c???u ng?????c l???i
T??nh y??u h??y ??? b??n c??c ng?????i m??i m??i
C??n th???i gian th??:
C??? k??? n?? tr??i ??i???
(Th???i gian v?? t??nh y??u ??? Ion Milos ??? Nh?? th?? Th???y ??i???n ??? Th?? h???u hi???n ?????i ??? Ph???m Vi???t ????o d???ch)
Hay:
Ng?????i ?????p
Ai vi???t t??n em b???ng ??nh s??ng
Ai v??? h??nh em b???ng ??nh tr??ng
(D??n ca D??y)

Ng?????i ?????p tr??ng nh?? tuy???t
Ch???m v??o th???y n??ng
Ng?????i ?????p tr??ng nh?? l???a
S??? v??o th???y m??t
Ng?????i kh??ng kh??t - nh??n ng?????i ?????p c??ng kh??t
Ng?????i kh??ng ????i - nh??n ng?????i ?????p c??ng ????i
Ng?????i mu???n ch???t- nh??n ng?????i ?????p l???i kh??ng mu???n ch???t n???a
??! Ng?????i ?????p l?? ?????c m??
Treo tr?????c m???t m???i ng?????i!
(L?? Ng??n S???n)
hay:
H??m qua s??u gi??? n??m m????i ph??t
                           ?????ng ch?? L?? nin t??? tr???n
N??m n??y ch???ng ki???n m???t l???n
              ??i???u b???t h???nh tr??m n??m kh??ng th???y n???a
                       Ng??y ng??y mu??n thu???
S??? l?? truy???n thuy???t ??au th????ng
                  Tin kinh ho??ng
S???t th??p b???t ti???ng k??u than
               S??ng n???c n??? tr??n nh???ng ng?????i c???ng s???n
                                    S???c n???ng ???? gh?? g???m
                                          Kh??ng l?? n???i ch??n ??i
Bi???t th??? n??o ????y v?? l??m g?? n???a!
                 Nh?? h??t l???n tr??i tr??n ???????ng ph???
N???i bu???n nh?? m???t c??? xe tang
                  N???i vui b?? nh?? ???c nh?? s??n
                       N???i bu???n ch???y nh?? ??i??n nh?? d???i
                                  Kh??ng ??nh m???t tr???i
                                                Kh??ng ??nh b??ng sang d???i
T???t c??? ???? r???c m???t l???p tuy???t ??en
                        S??ng qua b??o ch??
Tin ???p t???i
                Ng?????i c??ng nh??n tr?????c m??y
                      Nh?? m???t ch??n l??? ????? xu???ng b??n d???ng c???
Tr??? nh??? b???ng nghi??m trang nh?? c??c c??? gi??
                                        C??c c??? gi?? kh??c nh?? tr??? nh???!...
(Tr?????ng ca Vladimia Il??ch L?? nin ??? Maiacop xki ??? Tr???n D???n d???ch)
Hay:
S???m phu t???
??an Kh??u sinh
T????ng ti???n t???u
B??i m???c ????nh
Th???nh qu??n ca nh???t kh??c
V??? ng?? khuynh nh?? thinh
Chung c??? so???n ng???c b???t t??c qu??
???? nguy???n tr?????ng t??y b???t nguy???n tinh
C??? lai th??nh hi???n giai t???nh m???ch
Duy h???u ???m gi??? l??u k??? danh
(T????ng ti???n t???u ??? L?? B???ch)
S???m Phu t???
??an Kh??u sinh
S???p m???i r?????u
?????ng c?? sai
M???i anh ca m???t kh??c
V?? t??i nghe m???y b??i
R?????u ti???c ngon gi???a tr???ng chi??ng n??o c?? ????ng qu??
Kh??ng mu???n t??nh c??? say s??a m??i ho??i
X??a nay th??nh hi???n c?? ai t??n tu???i
Ch??? k??? u???ng r?????u l?? l??u danh mu??n ?????i
(S???p m???i r?????u ??? ????? Ho??ng d???ch)
N??i v???y, ch??? ti???ng Vi???t l?????c b??? ho??n to??n v???n ??i???u r???t d??? chu???c l???y th???t b???i th???m h???i. V?? ti???ng Vi???t ho???c ti???ng ph????ng ????ng l?? x??? ??m ??? ph??t ra t??? r??ng, ph???n nhi???u m???t ??m ti???t, kh??ng nh?? ti???ng c??c ??u ??? M??? - ??a ??m ti???t, m???t t??? n??i ???? c?? t??nh nh???c trong ???? v?? d??? nh?? b???a ??n s??ng (phi??n ??m): b??? r??t ph??t, ?????p - bui ti phul (Anh ), ?????p - k???r??t xv??i (Nga)???
Nh?? th?? Nguy???n Quang Thi???u v?? m???t s??? nh?? th??, ng?????i l??m th?? kh??c c??ng c?? c??ng c??? g???ng t??m t??i, ?????y l?? ??i???u ????ng tr??n tr???ng. Nh??ng theo quan ??i???m v?? c??ch th?????ng th???c, th???m ?????nh c???a t??i thi nh???ng g?? h??? vi???t ra kh??ng ph???i thi ca, v??n ch????ng. H??? ho??n to??n th???t b???i m???t tr??m ph???n tr??m.
Ng?????i vi???t ra lo???i V?? l???i th???t ????ng tr??ch, ng?????i tung h??, in ???n l??ng x?? c??ng ????ng tr??ch h??n, t??? ch???c n??o ???? trao t???ng gi???i th?????ng, khuy???n kh??ch c??? v?? th?? ????ng tr??ch v?? c??ng. Nh???ng ng?????i n??y n???u ???????c ????? b???t qu???n l?? c???m c????ng n???y m???c n???n v??n ngh??? n?????c nh?? th?? v??n ch????ng Vi???t ??i ?????n ????u? Nh??n ti???n ???y m???i ng?????i ???? r??!
H?? n???i ng??y 1 ??? 6 -2012
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